Hey you there!!
Hey you there!
Yes I mean you
Why don't you like my rhymes?
I like yours too!
In these funny times
I have discovered that I like this
And I want to do this more often but
Without your happily bliss
I won't have enough gut
Thinking you won't like it
So I hope you will read mine
As I will continue reading yours, and when fit
React and say it's fine
And I will be happy, thinking you care!
- Star -
Yes I mean you
Why don't you like my rhymes?
I like yours too!
In these funny times
I have discovered that I like this
And I want to do this more often but
Without your happily bliss
I won't have enough gut
Thinking you won't like it
So I hope you will read mine
As I will continue reading yours, and when fit
React and say it's fine
And I will be happy, thinking you care!
- Star -
Reacties op dit gedicht
| MayadeBij: | Donderdag, mei 08, 2003 17:44 |
| Yep! | |
| *Sheren*: | Donderdag, mei 08, 2003 16:44 |
| Nou bij deze dan.... Leuk gedicht ;) Liefs |
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| Evy*: | Donderdag, mei 08, 2003 15:57 |
| haha, toffe tekst. Met plezier gelezen. Enne, het wil niet zeggen omdat er niet wordt op gereageerd, dat we het niet mooi vinden!!! Maar langs de andere kant, het doet wel deugd om reactie te krijgen, een klein woord kan veel betekenen. liefs, Evy |
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Over dit gedicht
| Auteur: Mystic Star | 
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| Gecontroleerd door: Firebolt | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 08 mei 2003 | ||
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