Mrs Flintstone: | Vrijdag, augustus 10, 2007 23:12 |
Really good writing. The only comment I have is to rather use "For" or otherwise "because" instead of "''cause", because that will fit much better with thee and thou. "''cause" is slang language. Regards, Wilma |
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Auteur: Angel13 | ||
Gecontroleerd door: christina | ||
Gepubliceerd op: 10 augustus 2007 | ||
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