The first day
You came to me with friendly words
Love, care, a place to hide
Somewhere to just find some rest
When I couldn't sleep, and lonely cried
You promised you'd help me
If I listened to you
If I listened to you
And played by your rules
So I did; and I went through
Through the looking glass,
Through the mirror, the wall
Not thinking it might be strange
Not realizing it's odd at all
You closed the door behind me
Never to return?
Never to return?
You said I had a life to forget
And a past to burn
You told me you'd make me perfect
A walking barbie doll
I reached for that perfection
But soon, began to fall
I tried to run away from you
Over and over again, until
I didn't remember who I was
I didn't remember who I was
Without you; I don't know still
It's the first day now, of a newer life
It's true: you will win
And I now know I can't escape
It's time to give up, time to give in..
Reacties op dit gedicht
| Fading Away: | Zaterdag, september 03, 2005 09:11 |
| No, it's not. Don't give in. Please, don't listen. Nobody would like a perfect barbie doll. They want YOU. | |
| -Rosa-: | Donderdag, augustus 25, 2005 16:56 |
| oneindig veel ik-hou-van-jou's oneindig veel prachtig-gedichtje's oneindig veel never-give-up's ... |
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| The unreachable: | Donderdag, augustus 25, 2005 11:13 |
| Listen to me carefully: YOU will win, lieverd! YOU will win..remember that sentence and say it to yourself so you will never forget it! Believe in yourself and don't you ever give up!!! | |
| FireFly: | Donderdag, augustus 25, 2005 07:25 |
| It's never time to give up.. Je hebt die stap al gezet naar een nieuwer leven, misschien kun je de kracht vinden om ook die andere stappen te zetten, je echte zelf weer bij elkaar kunt rapen. Hold on girl! Succes&Liefs FireFly |
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| Gothicangel: | Donderdag, augustus 25, 2005 01:34 |
| It's by far away no time for you to give up or give in. Keep holding on you can do it. Take care |
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| Auteur: Mysticelfje |  
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| Gecontroleerd door: christina | ||
| Gepubliceerd op: 25 augustus 2005 | ||
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